Tour! Review! Make Me Yours by Melanie Harlow

He’s my brother’s best friend.

The hot single dad next door.

And one accidental sext later, my massive crush on him is no longer a secret.

Make Me Yours, an all-new rom com that is all too sexy from USA Today bestselling author Melanie Harlow is available now!


“So you get it now, huh?” I took his face in my hands. “It was always you, Cole.”

Cheyenne Dempsey has crushed on her brother’s best friend and their neighbor, Cole Mitchell, for as long as she can remember. As they got older and it became clear that Cole’s life was setting him on a very different path than the one she’s always dreamed of, Cheyenne tried to move on but everything always led her back to wanting Cole. It was always a fantasy, though, until one day Cheyenne accidentally sends him a racy text, and instead of turning her down he shocks her and tells her to go on. Growing up it may not have been Cole and Cheyenne’s time but suddenly every dream she’s ever had about them is coming true. Are they finally on the road to happily ever after or will Cole’s past drive a permanent wedge between them?

I’ve been looking forward to getting Cheyenne and Cole’s story ever since Cheyenne’s crush was revealed in the first Bellamy Creek story, Drive Me Wild. Unrequited love is always a fun trope and so is secretly crushing on your older brother’s best friend – not to mention, I’m a total sucker for a single dad hero! So this book had all the makings of the perfect small-town romance and boy did it deliver! It was sweet, sexy, funny, and packed with all the feels. Cole suffered a pretty tragic loss, leaving him a single dad to his little girl, Mariah. He’s devoted his life to being the best father he can be to his daughter which hasn’t left any time for romantic entanglements. Cheyenne Dempsey has been in his life so long, she’s practically family, but lately, he’s been having more than friendly feelings toward her. When he receives that fateful text from her and realizes that she has the same feelings, he finally decides to act on these new feelings. Because of their already strong bond, things move very fast between them once they finally take the leap. But Cole’s long-buried fears surrounding his past threaten everything they’re building.

Cole was such an amazing guy and a loving father. My heart really went out to him as he struggled to reconcile his past and what was happening in the present with Cheyenne. As frustrating as he was at times, I totally understood where he was coming from and enjoyed the personal journey his character took. I also loved Cheyenne and the fact that even though she’d pined for Cole for much of her life, now that she finally had him, she didn’t lose herself or let him play with her heart while he worked out his issues. Even if it hurt, she put herself first while still being supportive of him. While there was a bit of angst this was mainly a sweet and sexy love story. There was no doubt about the chemistry between Cheyenne and Cole!

I also loved returning to Bellamy Creek AND Cloverleigh Farms. These are two of my favorite fictional small towns where the residents feel like family so it’s always a treat to take a return trip. This book can certainly be read as a standalone but for the full effect, do yourself a favor and check out the other books in these series – especially if you’re a fan of feel-good, small-town romances like I am!

P.S. Can we take a moment to appreciate the cover of this book? I think it’s the perfect visual for Officer Cole Mitchell!

About Make Me Yours

He’s my brother’s best friend.

The hot single dad next door.

And one accidental sext later, my massive crush on him is no longer a secret.

It’s my own damn fault. I’m thirty years old, for heaven’s sake. I’m a kindergarten teacher and a (reasonably) responsible adult. I should know better than to get tipsy and draft a fake text listing all the dirty things I wish Officer Cole Mitchell would do to me.

I wasn’t supposed to hit send.

He wasn’t supposed to see it.

And he definitely wasn’t supposed to text back telling me to go on . . .

Because after that, things escalate quickly.

Cole is everything I’ve ever wanted. He’s sexy and protective. A devoted father to his little girl. A dedicated cop the whole town adores. The kind of guy you can trust to keep his hands to himself, even when you’re desperately hoping he won’t.

I’m not the girl he thought he’d end up with, but after all this time, I might finally get the chance to say the words I’ve always dreamed of . . . make me yours.

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Darlene spoke up. “My mother passed them down to me, and I want to make sure they’re in good condition so I can leave them to Cheyenne when she gets married.” Then she crossed herself and closed her eyes, her lips moving in a quick, silent prayer.

 Cheyenne ignored her mother and addressed Mariah again. “My brother and I always had to wash and dry the wedding china on holidays before we went to bed. It took forever.”

“I’d stay and help you, sis, but I have to get Blair home. Sorry.” Griffin gave her a grin that said he wasn’t the least bit sorry, and Cheyenne stuck her tongue out at him. 

“Cole, why don’t you stay and give Cheyenne a hand?” My mother suggested, wrapping her scarf around her neck. 

“That’s a great idea,” Darlene said brightly. Then she sort of bent over and rubbed one hip, her expression agonized. “I’d help her myself but I’ve been on my feet a lot today and the doctor said that isn’t good for my joints.”

“You should just get to bed, Darlene,”my mother said, shepherding Mariah toward the front door. “Cole will be more than happy to stay and help Cheyenne.”

“Oh, that’s okay.” Cheyenne smiled at me and shook her head. “I can handle them.”

But Darlene beamed at me, reaching over and snatching my coat out of my hands. “That’s so nice of you, Cole. I’ll just hang this in the front closet.” Before she left the room, she and my mother exchanged a look that had me wondering if the whole helping-with-the-dishes thing had been a set-up. 

Either way, ten minutes later Cheyenne and I were pushing up our sleeves in the kitchen, the house dark and silent except for the running faucet and the hum of the dishwasher. 

“I’ll wash, you dry?” she asked, adding dish soap to the side of the sink she’d plugged and lined with a towel. 


She took a plate from the stack to her left and placed it in the warm soapy water. “Oh! I almost forgot.” Slipping her rings and bracelets off, she set them on the windowsill above the sink. “So I don’t scratch anything,” she explained. 

“Oh.” I glanced down at my wedding ring. “It’s okay,” she said quickly. “You don’t have to take it off.”

“It’s fine,” I said, working it off my finger and placing it on the sill next to her jewelry. For some reason, I felt compelled to explain why I still wore it all the time. “Mariah once told me she likes when I wear it, so  .  .  .”

“I think it’s nice, ”she said. “I like a guy who wears his ring. It says something about him, you know?”

I nodded, my attraction to her growing even stronger. “Still, we’d better be careful with these dishes.”

“Damn right, we’d better,” she deadpanned. “This is my fucking wedding china, Cole. If we even look at it wrong, I might end up a spinster.” She laughed as she gently scrubbed the plate with a cloth. “My God. Is she not totally ridiculous?”

“She’s pretty bad,” I agreed, taking the plate from her and carefully drying it with the soft clean towel she’d given me. “But mine wasn’t much better tonight. Did you have the feeling something was up between them as we were saying goodnight?”

Yes,” she said. “And it’s probably my fault because I made the mistake of telling my mom you bought me dinner last night. In her mind, I believe we are now betrothed.”

I laughed. “That’s all it takes, huh?”

“Apparently. Tomorrow I’ll be pregnant because we washed dishes together after dark.”

“Wow. Guess I should have worn the rubber gloves.”

About Melanie

USA Today bestselling author Melanie Harlow likes her martinis dry, her heels high, and her history with the naughty bits left in. When she’s not writing or reading, she gets her kicks from TV series like Schitt’s Creek, Homeland, and Fleabag. She occasionally runs three miles, but only so she can have more gin and steak.

Melanie is the author of the CLOVERLEIGH FARMS series, the ONE & ONLY series, AFTER WE FALL series, the HAPPY CRAZY LOVE series, the FRENCHED series, and the sexy historical SPEAK EASY duet, set in the 1920s. She lifts her glass to romance readers and writers from her home near Detroit, MI, where she lives with her husband, two daughters, and pet rabbit.

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